So I'm deciding to skip Ch. 4 since I don't have the first part of the chapter to work from. I'm going to work on Ch. 5, which is Mana explaining the Speakers to Calder, and then compare it to the version I have back home.
See which one I like better. I almost wonder if it's moving along to fast, but I dunno. I'm wondering as I write up this blog if maybe Calder is found in the forest because he is running from who he is.
It has to be a lot to take in, being told you are not normal. I might go back and edit in scenes showcasing how not normal he is when I work on the second draft.
So tomorrow is the day. Grandfather goes in to have surgery done. I'm tired, but I can't sleep because of the worry. I suppose I'll work on writing until I pass out with the laptop on... well... my lap ^^;
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